diff --git a/Hack Days Oct-2026.md b/Hack Days Oct-2026.md
index dab931d8..b68fbd30 100644
--- a/Hack Days Oct-2026.md	
+++ b/Hack Days Oct-2026.md	
@@ -6,23 +6,23 @@ We've grown quite a bit, so there's a good chance some of you have no idea who a
 
 Which is fine. Sometimes I'm not entirely sure myself.
 
-I work on our macOS browser. And for these Hack Days, I thought I'd make it a little bit greater again. Again.
+I work on our macOS browser. And for these Hack Days, I thought I'd make it a little bit greater again. 
+
+Again.
 
 **[Pause]**
 
-They say Jesus was a simple hacker. Took a little water,
+They say Jesus was a simple hacker. Took a little water…
 
 **[Drink water]**
 
-Turned it into wine.
+Turned it into wine…
 
 **[Start the screen sharing with https://infiniteslop.ai/ open]**
 
-Pretty impressive for a hack-days project.
+Pretty impressive for a Hack Days project.
 
-
-
-The world has gone crazy.
+But seriously… how did the world get so crazy?
 
 AI is everywhere. Information is coming at us faster than we can process it. Everything is getting smarter, faster, more complicated…
 
@@ -32,11 +32,17 @@ And somehow, everything is starting to look exactly the same.
 
 Everything is a Liquid Ass. Transparent panels, floating buttons, rounded corners…
 
+!BEIGE!
+
 You know what? Sometimes I just want to burn it all down.
 
 **[Click Fire — show the new fire animation]**
 
-Ahh. Much better.
+MUCH better!
+
+Let's do it again!
+
+**[Click Fire — show the new fire animation]**
 
 But where can we even Start now?
 
@@ -46,9 +52,9 @@ Sometimes you just want to run away, back to something familiar.
 
 **[Click Run → enter Bookmark search mode]**
 
-Something that can help you keep going.
+Something that keeps you going.
 
-**[Find and open the DuckDuckGoing bookmark]**
+**[Enter Going -> open DuckDuckGoing bookmark]**
 
 Or Search for something
 
@@ -58,7 +64,7 @@ Or Search for something
  
 **[type "ducklings", show results]**
 
-There we go. Ducks. The internet still has some good things.
+There we go. Ducks. The internet still has some good stuff.
 
 And when even ducks aren't enough… sometimes you just need someone to talk to.