diff --git a/work/projects/ios-subscription-day7-promo-privacy-triage.md b/work/projects/ios-subscription-day7-promo-privacy-triage.md
index cdc06928..a974daed 100644
--- a/work/projects/ios-subscription-day7-promo-privacy-triage.md
+++ b/work/projects/ios-subscription-day7-promo-privacy-triage.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Asana project task: https://app.asana.com/1/137249556945/project/120240649130951
 
 ## What pixels are being added?
 
-Three new pixels fired from `SubscriptionPromoExistingUserCoordinator`:
+Three new pixels for the day-7 existing-user promo half-sheet:
 
 | Pixel name | When fired |
 |---|---|
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ No user identifiers, no browsing data, no PII.
 
 No new data is collected from the user. The parameters (`ru`, `free_trial`) are:
 - `ru` — derived from the install variant flag already stored locally; same parameter used by `m_privacy-pro_onboarding_promotion_impression` and `m_privacy-pro_skipped_onboarding_promotion_impression`
-- `free_trial` — derived from App Store product availability check already performed by `SubscriptionManager`; same parameter used by the existing promo pixels above
+- `free_trial` — derived from App Store product availability, already evaluated at the time of display; same parameter used by the existing promo pixels above
 
 ### Does this introduce any new data collection mechanism?